Hi everybody, today I'm going to do my oral presentation about my summer holidays! Fist I'm going to talk about my travel to England. AFter that I'll explain my trip to Kenya and Zanzibar. And finally I'll explain a little bit what I've done when I came back home.
From 18th of July until the 6th of August I stayed in England. I went to England with Stuart my english teacher and some friends who came with me, in a town called Poole. This was the four time that I've been to England with some friends and I stayed with the same family as last year. Every morning we went with Mary our teacher in there, who helped us, because we're preparing for the Pet exam. IN the afternoons we did some activities like Splash Down, Corf Castle...
ON Saturday we went to London and we did my favourite activity shopping. We went ot ABercrombie, M&M shop...
One Sunday spent all the day with my English family in Thorpe Park, that is like Port Aventura but bigger. It was amazing, but the bad thing was that when Jenny and me wanted to ride to a rollercoaster we lost the baby boy Ben, that was really hard at finally we found him. He's really clever he went to warn a girl who works in the park. And finally I saw him. The mother was really gratefull. The last day was really really sad because I had a great time there.
After this amazing travel to England. I came back to Banyoles. Two days after we started our travel to Kenya. First we went to Amboseli's Park where we saw a lot of elephants. That was the first day but in the second day we went to see a Massay town, that was amazing we could see the traditional dance and we could dance with them. They showed us their home and then we gave to the little children some balls and ballons, they were really happy and grateful. The next two days we went to Nairobi the capital of Kenya adn we felt a little bit how is the live in the city. Then we went to another place for an hour from Nairobi, we went to a giraff orphanate and we caught a crocodile and wie could touch it. Then these few days in Nairobi we went to Nakuru's Lake, where we saw a lots of rinohs adn nyu, and a Lake with lots of flamengos. The last park that we visited it was Massai Mara, there we could see Lions and our first cheetah, that was great. Those two animals are the more elegants for me. THen we caught a plane and we went to Zanzibar an Island near Kenya. There we visited the turtle island, where we could see enourmous turtles and then at night we went to a English bar to see the Barça vs Madrid match. Next day we went to a hotel called Gemma de l'est and where we've relaxed for three days. And we made friends. Well we met the people who worked in the hotel and now we speak to them on facebook, that is amazing because we speak english with them and we can learn a lot! In the hotel we gave some words in Spanish to them and they gave us some words in Suahili, their language.
When I came back to Banyoles I did my homework, but the most wonderful was that my best friend Cristina showed me the music group One Direction and now a part of Justin Bieber I'm in love with Zayn a member of the group that I call "Pinxo". Now that group is starting to be famous here in Catalonia, and Cristina and me We're trying to convince our parents to go to England this christmas and we see them in concert in Bourmooth and then go to Poole to visit our English families.
Thanks that's all I hope you've enjoyed !
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MY OPINION ABOUT MY ORAL PRESENTATION.
I think that this year I'm improving my grammar forms, I'm using the correct form if it's in past or in future...
And I'm using different classes of words, different vocabulary.
MY OPINION ABOUT MY ORAL PRESENTATION.
I think that this year I'm improving my grammar forms, I'm using the correct form if it's in past or in future...
And I'm using different classes of words, different vocabulary.
PRESENTATION
- Did you use any resources?I use the form "I've done, I've been", and somethings like that, that was good because now I've learnt more grammar
- Were the resources relevant and attractive?NO, not too much
BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT
- Did you use any resources?I use the form "I've done, I've been", and somethings like that, that was good because now I've learnt more grammar
- Were the resources relevant and attractive?NO, not too much
BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT
- Did you look at your audience most of the time? yes, I did.
- Did you read from your notes? I read from the notes when there was a thing that I never remember.STRUCTURE
- Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? Yes, but when
- Did you use discourse markers to to make your ideas more clear?
- Did you use discourse markers to to make your ideas more clear?
(First, then, secondly,on the one hand, on the other hand,
finally..)CONTENT
Did you introduce interesting NEW information to your audience? well, I explain what I've done in my summer, I sopose that was interesting, I hope it.
- Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet, books..? No I've just watched my pictures about summer and I started wrote.
LANGUAGE and PRONUNCIATION
LANGUAGE and PRONUNCIATION
Yes I use fillers when i didn't remember my text.
PRONUNCIATION AND INTONATION
Did you know how to pronounce all your words? Yes I knew
- Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher?Yes , I check my pronunciation to my sister, and my family.
- Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time?Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? I made some interruptions, and sometimes I was saying "amm" and things like that because I was really nervous.
Classmates
Cristina C: She went to UK with a family she spent three weeks in there. After that she went to Singapour and Bali then the spent some days in Torrevalentina. She did great, but in the middle of the oral she started laugh.
Júlia: SShe stayed in England as Cristina, then she went to St Antoni with one of her friends, and at finally she went to Marrackesh. She did good.
Carla: She went to England, then she spent some days in St.SEbastià, and finally she has been to Marrackesh with Júlia. She did really good.
Gemma : She went to England for fist time with her English teacher Stuart. After this she went to St. Antoni, and she invited Claudia to spent some days with her. She returned to Banyoles and she stayed with her best friends. She did really good, all was organized, she had got a little problem but she continue talking.
Arnau: Arnau went to lanzarote with his family, then to Lloret de mar and Platja d'Aro, but he and his brother spent so much time playing tennis with his father. Good
Clàudia: Clàuida went to Poole (England) with a lot of friends. Then she went to Platja d'Aro with Elisabet her best friend. Roses with her father and her sister, and she invited Gemma there. Then she returned to Banyoles for few days and then she went to Holland. Very Good
Albert Q: Albert spend part of his summer playing Basketball he went to two diferents campus Jordi Trias and Benny Alvarez. Then he went to St. Antoni and had a gread time. Then returned to Banyoles and then finished the summer. He did really good, without power point because he had a problem, but he did excellent.
Ferran V: Ferran went to Tenerife with his family and then returned to Banyoles and had a great time with his friends. I think that wasn't very good because he read the text a lot.
Adam P: Adam did a lot of things this last summer. He went Football Campus in Mieres, then he spent all day with his friends in Gamelab. At finally he went to Andorra with his parents. He did Good.
Clara : Whe went to Llençà and english camp in l'Escala. Then she went to Cap Norfeu and Port de la Selva with all her family. She did normal.
Cristina R: Seh did a lot of homework until the 12th of July when her brother born. Then she went to St Antoni, Llençà and at finally she celebrated her sister birthday. She did good. the oral was short.
Albert R: He went to Britain with Pau and some friends, then he did a trip to Kenya and Zanzibar with his parents as me. He visited a lots of parks. He was really fast.
Pau S : He went to Bourmooth with Roca, the he went to Port AVentura with his friends they spent one day there. At finally he went to Platja d'Aro with Pau Guilana. he did good.
Ferran I: He went to Lanzarote, Platja d'ARo and Lloret Mar, but he spent a lot of time playing tennis. He did good.
Jordi M : He stayed in BAnyoles, he spent all day in Gamelab with friends, Banyoles, Aiguafreda, and Mallorca with his family. He read a lot.
Francesc R : Gamelab with Marias. Then he travelled with his family to Denmark and he went to Legoland. He did great.
PRONUNCIATION AND INTONATION
Did you know how to pronounce all your words? Yes I knew
- Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher?Yes , I check my pronunciation to my sister, and my family.
- Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time?Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? I made some interruptions, and sometimes I was saying "amm" and things like that because I was really nervous.
Classmates
Cristina C: She went to UK with a family she spent three weeks in there. After that she went to Singapour and Bali then the spent some days in Torrevalentina. She did great, but in the middle of the oral she started laugh.
Júlia: SShe stayed in England as Cristina, then she went to St Antoni with one of her friends, and at finally she went to Marrackesh. She did good.
Carla: She went to England, then she spent some days in St.SEbastià, and finally she has been to Marrackesh with Júlia. She did really good.
Gemma : She went to England for fist time with her English teacher Stuart. After this she went to St. Antoni, and she invited Claudia to spent some days with her. She returned to Banyoles and she stayed with her best friends. She did really good, all was organized, she had got a little problem but she continue talking.
Arnau: Arnau went to lanzarote with his family, then to Lloret de mar and Platja d'Aro, but he and his brother spent so much time playing tennis with his father. Good
Clàudia: Clàuida went to Poole (England) with a lot of friends. Then she went to Platja d'Aro with Elisabet her best friend. Roses with her father and her sister, and she invited Gemma there. Then she returned to Banyoles for few days and then she went to Holland. Very Good
Albert Q: Albert spend part of his summer playing Basketball he went to two diferents campus Jordi Trias and Benny Alvarez. Then he went to St. Antoni and had a gread time. Then returned to Banyoles and then finished the summer. He did really good, without power point because he had a problem, but he did excellent.
Ferran V: Ferran went to Tenerife with his family and then returned to Banyoles and had a great time with his friends. I think that wasn't very good because he read the text a lot.
Adam P: Adam did a lot of things this last summer. He went Football Campus in Mieres, then he spent all day with his friends in Gamelab. At finally he went to Andorra with his parents. He did Good.
Clara : Whe went to Llençà and english camp in l'Escala. Then she went to Cap Norfeu and Port de la Selva with all her family. She did normal.
Cristina R: Seh did a lot of homework until the 12th of July when her brother born. Then she went to St Antoni, Llençà and at finally she celebrated her sister birthday. She did good. the oral was short.
Albert R: He went to Britain with Pau and some friends, then he did a trip to Kenya and Zanzibar with his parents as me. He visited a lots of parks. He was really fast.
Pau S : He went to Bourmooth with Roca, the he went to Port AVentura with his friends they spent one day there. At finally he went to Platja d'Aro with Pau Guilana. he did good.
Ferran I: He went to Lanzarote, Platja d'ARo and Lloret Mar, but he spent a lot of time playing tennis. He did good.
Jordi M : He stayed in BAnyoles, he spent all day in Gamelab with friends, Banyoles, Aiguafreda, and Mallorca with his family. He read a lot.
Francesc R : Gamelab with Marias. Then he travelled with his family to Denmark and he went to Legoland. He did great.
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